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Photography Photography \ Architecture | 04/07/08 @647 | Vasco | Comments critiques (24) | Views views (267)


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Well, this was done in a lonely day wondering throughout the University from where I graduated and currently work. This is a very cool building full of interesting shapes and where I spent a lot of time studying. The tree adds up a bit to the composition... at least in my opinion... Tell me yours!

Camera: Olympus E330
Lens: Zuiko Digital 14-45mm
Shutter: 1/100
F: 6.3
ISO: 100
Filters: Circular polarized
 
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Avatar GTO

 04/07/08 @652

hhmmm...not sure about this composition IMHO seems a bit too buisy...maybe just only the tree could work better...great blue sky however...
 
Avatar blackshad

 04/07/08 @659

the composition is particular, its a bit too heighty for my taste
but the colors are great, and the shapes are interesting
the tree is way too big, couldnt you axe it out before taking the picture?
 
Avatar Vasco

 04/07/08 @672

I can ask the Dean if I can Chop down the tree to make a photo of the library... But I think she wouldn't like it very much and probably fire me if I did it!!
 
Avatar ersen-t

 04/07/08 @693

the colors are great.
well done.
 
Avatar everseen

 04/07/08 @720

Cool architecture. Composition's also good. No crit at all.
 
Avatar moserArtist

 04/07/08 @846

Nice colors and shapes.

Think a better position of the tree is needed. Maybe not having to chop it down but just find a slightly different angle where the branches of the tree is not distracting the background building.
 
Avatar GoldPaw

 04/08/08 @151

Great bold colors and crisp geometric shapes you have here. I agree with the others about the composition not being the best for showing the library itself. But, I like the off-balance effect that the tree adds to. The building is a bit lost, but the geometry is emphasized.
 
Avatar Roadrunner

 04/08/08 @180

I like it. I dont see how the composition could be improved if you move 10 steps to the left or the right. The tree wont go anywhere.
Some parts are at the verge of over-exposure.
Colourful, sharp and clean. Good work.
 
Avatar Vasco

 04/08/08 @489

Thanks for the comments!

@ Goldpaw: It was my intention to unbalance it a bit, I could have gone for a different composition and take this from another angle only capturing the building, But I also liked the tree.

@Roadrunner: You're right moving to either sides I would end up with the tree there anyway, ans as I said before, I cant chop it down It was my intention to have strong bold colours, I set the camera for vivid mode and full saturation, plus I used a circular polarized to get this colours.
 
Avatar Jafus

 04/08/08 @584

:)agree with above about tree..
Nice arch and colors
 
Avatar cupcake

 04/08/08 @918

Good work.
I think it would look great as a B&W also.
 
Avatar bheeshoom

 04/09/08 @216

ahaa!! awsome colurs!! it just reminds me our INDIA flag!
 
Avatar zaclab

 04/09/08 @341

Nice composition and colors, good shot!
 
Avatar MsMichelleLynn

 04/09/08 @390

I like this Vasco! I enjoy the geometric patterns, Each segment is bold with different colors and textures. Nicely done.
 
Avatar Tommyguns

 04/09/08 @752

Nice work Vasco! The tree is a little distracting, but the rest of the image is nice! For once, the clear sky works really well with this particular composition!

Keep at it! ;)

Tommyguns
 
Avatar Daykan

 04/11/08 @098

Wonderful colors!!
 
Avatar androx3k

 04/11/08 @366

I like it very much!
 
Avatar ARZILLIER66

 04/13/08 @641

Great color
Agree Patrick comment
 
Avatar ThruMyEyez

 04/16/08 @439

I almost missed this!
Great colors and angles!! The tree is distracting but sometimes one has to work with what is there. Overall a good image.
 
Avatar killadore

 04/17/08 @682

i really like the saturated colors and especially in the foreground going against the lines of the building. very good
 
Avatar LiddleLarsen

 04/17/08 @815

Hummm what can I say?

I still like your library
 
Avatar danheacock

 04/19/08 @910

I agree with what has been said already. My eyes are fighting on whether to look at the building or the tree. Maybe moving to the right a little and keeping the low angle could yield a better combination of the two elements. Just a thought! Loving the architecture though, really flows nicely.
 
Avatar curlyhair

 04/23/08 @604

The tree actually ruins the composition Other then this I love the colors - these green,orange,blue - very powerful palette :)
 
Avatar Daywish

 04/24/08 @436

Very impressive cool aesthetics. Great colors, too.
 
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   Vasco
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  Vasco
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Birthdate:
  04/26/1981 (27)
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  Portugal
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  09/23/2004

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